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    dots Submission Name: Dear Babydots
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    Author: Zakaria Glenza
    Elite Ratio:    0.84 - 3/6/65
    Words: 147
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Dedicated to our future son/daughter.
    We Love you.
    We are in Love.

    Mama andDaddy.


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    dotsDear Babydots
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    Dear Baby,

    I know that you are somewhere,
    Waiting for the righteous one to say the word “Be”,
    To come and live with her and me,
    Until then, God bless you there…

    Dear Baby,

    Yesterday we were so excited,
    We thought you were to come,
    If you had seen the face of your mom…
    Seemed like a second moon was lighted…

    Dear Baby,

    God didn’t decide yet,
    I will bow and pray for his grace,
    He is the creator of life, time and space,
    He once decided with whom I get married and the day we met…

    Dear Baby,

    Despite yesterday’s little fuss,
    My love for you and your mom grew up,
    Our prayers, dreams and hopes will never stop,
    Until you come and pray, dream and hope with us…


    Yours, with Love

    Mama and Daddy.




    Submitted on 2007-10-31 06:39:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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