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    dots Submission Name: Alone with a Bookdots
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    Author: gallagherc314
    ASL Info:    29, Female, Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    1.56 - 1/3/5
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 106
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 841



    Description:
       A poem about hiding emotions.


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    dotsAlone with a Bookdots
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    A good book is handy for more
    Than reading- handier than a tv-
    More subtle in it’s intent
    Than a hand held video game, with

    Less to repent.
    It’s handy for such times
    As come (when lifted rightly,
    It more fully blocks the sun)-

    When we would rather refrain
    From speaking, it gives our eyes good
    Reason for blindness- it is in fact
    The perfect excuse for a polite snub

    It fills an empty moment with interest
    A fine substitute for the loss of
    Conversation- giving the air of Godiva
    In place of Heresy’s common appeal

    Yes, it’s a tidy tool for such times,
    As sneak upon us, like this
    To give us the studied appearance
    Of not needing what we miss

    2-16-04




    Submitted on 2007-10-31 15:26:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      I have no grammetrical problems with this. i loved it and i can relate to this write. half of the time i would rather live in a book than have conversation with mouth breathers! lol nice poem i hope to read more!
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]
      The capitialization at the beginning of each line throws off the rhythm for me.

    I think the points you make in the poem are very strong and I enjoy reading about all the different ways to use a book to help isolate yourself.
    | Posted on 2007-10-31 00:00:00 | by IEggman7 | [ Reply to This ]



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