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    dots Submission Name: Alone on the Holidaysdots

    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 364
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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       A poem about how it feels to be all alone on the holidays.

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    dotsAlone on the Holidaysdots

    Youíre sitting there alone the holidays are here
    This really has to be the worst time of the year
    It all seems so pointless when youíre all alone
    Just sitting and thinking about it chills me to the bone

    No one seems to understand just how bad it can be
    Going through the holidays without a family
    You hate to interfere with the plans of your friends
    They have their own families that is where that ends

    So you sit alone and think about your life
    How it used to be with your children and your wife
    All of the good times are memories of the past
    Who wouldíve thought the good times wouldnít last

    Everybody telling you what a good time they had
    Hearing all about that really makes you sad
    So you sit alone and cry a few more tears
    As you sit and remember all of the past years

    When your house was filled with laughter and cheer
    You wonder if youíll make it through another year
    But at this point you donít care, you have no way to know
    You really donít want to stay but you donít want to go

    Itís hard to be all by yourself through the holidays
    Itís such a heavy burden on your heart it weighs
    Itís like a block of concrete has been placed upon your chest
    Everything just went to hell even though you tried your best

    This is supposed to be the time when everything is good
    But your life isnít like that you wish you understood
    You wish you understood why you have to be alone
    And for just what sins they feel you must atone

    Itís just so depressing when no one is around
    Everythingís so quiet thereís not a single sound
    No sounds of childrenís laughter ringing in your ears
    Being alone on the holidays is one of your biggest fears

    But you are all alone this you know is true
    You try to figure out just what can you do
    Just what can you do to make everything good?
    You just want to fix itÖ. if only you could

    Submitted on 2007-10-31 22:49:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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