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    dots Submission Name: Donít Judge Me dots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 212
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 1135
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1197



    Description:
       A poem about judging people on the way they look


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    Donít judge me by the way I look, some things you canít see
    Like the thoughts and feelings, that dwell inside of me
    The way I look has nothing to do with anything at all
    Except to narrow minded people, whose brains are very small

    Iím not as dumb as you think, open up your mind
    If you take the time a lot of things youíll find
    Tattoos and piercings are just out there for show
    If you never take the time, you will never know

    That things arenít always the way that they appear
    But youíll never know that if you donít get near
    That I am a gentle soul, with the best of intentions
    Things like that are the things that no one ever mentions

    I just have to be myself no matter what the price
    If you canít accept that Iíll give you some advice
    Just look past the outside look within to see
    Thatís the only way youíll see the real me

    Too many people are too damn quick to say
    Oh he must be this or that because he looks that way
    Remember judge not lest you be judged yourself
    And thatís the kind of thing you canít place on a shelf.




    Submitted on 2007-10-31 22:52:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow. I came here to thank you for your comment on After It's All Been Said, and was pulled in by Don't Judge Me.
    I really like how you manage to be so conversational. Sometimes poems sound stilted, to get to the rhyme. Not yours.
    Thank you for YOUR encouragement. It means even more when I see the calibur of your writing. Anna
    | Posted on 2007-11-10 00:00:00 | by amrslamr | [ Reply to This ]
      I like this peom alot mainly becouse I can relate to it alot. I'm still in high school and people just see me as the girl that wears black and has piercings and they don't even give me a chance. This is a good poem mainly becouse there's alot of people out there like me that can probably relate to it...
    | Posted on 2007-11-09 00:00:00 | by fallen_angel90 | [ Reply to This ]


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