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    dots Submission Name: My Best Frienddots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 860
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    Bytes: 789



    Description:
       A light-hearted piece about my best friend


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    dotsMy Best Frienddots
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    You are the one that makes me feel so good
    You always leave me in a happy mood
    You always listen when I talk to you
    You cuddle close when Iím feeling blue

    When we go to sleep at night
    You cuddle close, I hold you tight
    You place your head upon my chest
    As we get our nightly rest

    You never complain about anything
    It almost unnatural the joy you bring
    Youíre always there to make me smile
    Youíre clothing never goes out of style

    You will always be my best friend
    I know youíre there until the end
    You never question what I say
    You donít get mad when I go away

    Thatís the facts and where itís at
    My best friend is Squiggles the Cat




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      Too funny! I like the twist. lol. I was thinking, "Your CLOTHING never goes out of style" ? Then when I realized it was your kitty, it was an, "Ohhhh, I get it" moment! lol.
    Poor kitty, though, you say you love it and then give it a name like Squiggles. lol. (JUST KIDDING! LOL)
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by amrslamr | [ Reply to This ]
      Damn straight, the only one that will never tell of your secrets, Your cat I loove this peom it's AWEsome!!
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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