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Submission Name: Is dots

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Author:	Survivor_Dean
ASL Info:	42/M/Minnesota
Elite Ratio:	2.02 - 165/186/124
Words:	124

Class/Type:	Poetry/Serious
Total Views:	631
Average Vote:	No vote yet.
Bytes:	896

Description:
A different style that I tried out

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Love:
Is nothing, it's all so fake

Hate:
Is the strongest emotion to take

Life:
Is for people that care about it

Death:
Is for people that don't give a shit

Happiness:
Is something I know nothing about

Sadness:
Is the feeling I can live without

Dreaming:
Is the only time good things take place

Awake:
Is when I know that I've lost the race

Feeling:
Is something I don't want to do

Numbness:
Is the feeling I wish was true

Sickness:
Is a disease that’s rotting my brain

Wellness:
Is never feeling the pain

Heaven:
Is a place I’ll never see

Hell:
Is right here on earth for me

Submitted on 2007-10-31 22:54:53 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Oh yes i love this. all of it is so true and i can say that i can relate. i have been to this point several times and i am only 18. life will not get any better i believe. Great write

| Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]

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Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3 It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
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