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    dots Submission Name: Isdots
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    Author: Survivor_Dean
    ASL Info:    42/M/Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    2.02 - 165/186/124
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 631
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 896



    Description:
       A different style that I tried out


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    dotsIsdots
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    Love:
    Is nothing, it's all so fake

    Hate:
    Is the strongest emotion to take

    Life:
    Is for people that care about it

    Death:
    Is for people that don't give a shit

    Happiness:
    Is something I know nothing about

    Sadness:
    Is the feeling I can live without

    Dreaming:
    Is the only time good things take place

    Awake:
    Is when I know that I've lost the race

    Feeling:
    Is something I don't want to do

    Numbness:
    Is the feeling I wish was true

    Sickness:
    Is a disease thatís rotting my brain

    Wellness:
    Is never feeling the pain

    Heaven:
    Is a place Iíll never see

    Hell:
    Is right here on earth for me




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      Oh yes i love this. all of it is so true and i can say that i can relate. i have been to this point several times and i am only 18. life will not get any better i believe. Great write
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]


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