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    dots Submission Name: My Playthingdots
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    Author: Silent_Tears
    ASL Info:    16/f/BC
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 90/111/59
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 294
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotsMy Playthingdots
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    fresh pale delicate skin
    just waiting, begging to be held
    perfect shape, perfect taste
    Warm blood flowing just beneath

    little cuts just deep enough
    You wimper, I smile
    You shiver, I quake
    The anticipation growing
    Thy life draining

    The dull look of your eyes asking why?
    The grey skin covered in my writting
    Blue partched lips speak pleasures no more
    Frozen in time

    bare hands placed on thy neck
    total control
    Tighening ever so slightly
    moving just right
    Nice and slow, rough and brutal
    Filling the need

    Final release, pure ecsasty
    The final Kiss
    No more will breath fill my plaything



    The Patient Lover




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 01:52:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. I can't think of much else to say it's very good and I liked it alot... Wonderful job.
    | Posted on 2007-11-02 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. this has to be the best sm/necrophilia poem i have read on this site in a long time. i really enjoyed reading this poem. thanks
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Demon__666 | [ Reply to This ]



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