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    dots Submission Name: Honeysuckles Don't Grow in Alaskadots
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    Author: Secrets Unheard
    ASL Info:    18/m/nj
    Elite Ratio:    4.25 - 84/101/48
    Words: 46
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
    Total Views: 96
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 384



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       Haha, so the last word of every line can be taken more than one way, I guess. So read the last word, let it sink in, then read the next line, until you get to resolution. Then, take the last word, such as resolution, and put it at the beginning of the next line as well. Hah, good luck!


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    dotsHoneysuckles Don't Grow in Alaskadots
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    Autumn leaves.
    Winter comes.
    Spring screams with pleasure during the simultaneous climax.
    Summer draws it's curtains, and there is no resolution...
    ...on this computer screen...
    ...that keeps the bugs out...
    ...at second base...
    ...to echo charlie.

    This is freedom of thought.
    Flow of ideas.
    Constant.




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 09:31:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      freedom of thought.
    you are free to think that honeysuckle doesnt grow in alaska.

    at first i was annoyed by the whole computer screen resolution until i realised this was an excersize in free thought and word association too guess! i adore word association... im shocking coz i always make the most crazy connections ever.

    well done.
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      Huh... That IS an interesting one. I love it.
    The way seasons are wound throughout this is wonderful, and worded very nicely.

    "This is freedom of thought."

    ...I really like the way you think.

    What else can I say? Brilliant.

    -nikkki
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Razor2TheRosary | [ Reply to This ]
      You left the original copy of this at your desk. and Winchock and I read the first two lines and its brilliant. As with the rest of the piece, but the beginning is just amazing.

    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Dimension_X | [ Reply to This ]



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