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    dots Submission Name: Time cursedots
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    Author: Jessica Lynn
    ASL Info:    22/f/mn
    Elite Ratio:    2.86 - 121/119/57
    Words: 175
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 955
    Average Vote:    4.0000
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    dotsTime cursedots
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    Time that slowly breaks the mind, and transforms the

    body brings forth new life so as to take away and give

    back. Sweet minutes bring forth the dawn of a new

    century, a new person, a new world so thought out and

    dreamed about. But wickedly this father time freezes

    for a moment and clears this broken mind. And only for

    a moment, this mind and these blind eyes are freed,

    only to be prisoner to a painful second repeating itself

    in the same immortal essence. Woe to the being

    trapped in the hourglass, drowning in the seconds,

    holding only the curse of restless impatience. Dreams

    fall through like grains of sand, smothering this creature

    with what could have been and what could be. When

    the hourglass shatters, all that is left is the memory of

    time, and the cruel truth of reality.




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 14:37:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      i like it. keep posting. this was a good read. ill be back to see it later. i love the imagery. peace




    tina
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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