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    dots Submission Name: Smiledots
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    Author: Big_Bill789
    Elite Ratio:    3.62 - 318/350/99
    Words: 107
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
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    dotsSmiledots
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    Yeah I was like him

    soaked up in a reality
    made purely of fiction
    I used to be something different
    now im astray in fearful abandonment
    and the catastrophe that lay before me
    strikes its indignant hammer like a court room
    verdict, but I could not stop this
    I could not stop the world from
    taking what was mine
    and now I have nothing left to give
    all gone in vain
    like drops of rain
    Im a stranger in a town full of burning souls
    no stops, no lights, no fines, no tolls
    lingering on, in my own feelingless shadows
    I have nothing left
    but you.




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 21:23:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow.. I am in love with this write it decribes me to a T.... Amazing just how much i know the feeling.. This is so personal so... much pain and suffering coming stright from the heart and thats what i love the most about it. I don't run into many like this but when the time comes and I do am practically dumb-founded....great poem.. Glade it was posted... Shame there aren't more comments but don't allow that to stop you from posting this is truely a great write...

    ~!*Jackz*!~
    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]
      Very Strong and very personal write
    To me you are seaking of someone that seems to have given up on their true self or have agreed to live their life the way someone else wants them to live
    I have made this same mistake so many times in my own life
    I know exactly of the sadness you are describing
    Please Trust me on this
    To Live ones life in Happiness they have to be their own True Self
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-11-02 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]



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