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    dots Submission Name: Moment.dots
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    Author: dark_dreams6789
    ASL Info:    17/f
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 6/11/12
    Words: 80
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 92
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 501



    Description:
       Written September 15, 2005

    It's an old one, I recently found it, typed it up, and gave it a title.

    // post edited 11-9-07 (New Description, New Title)


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    dotsMoment.dots
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    The moment is fleeting...
    and yet it holds significant meaning...

    Tears..
    They evaporate...
    ... promises disintegrate...
    life complicates...
    ...The dreamers are left
    to contemplate...

    The moment...
    ... Although it may flee
    first evaporates... and
    condenses into that familiar salty sea...

    And we are left to wonder...
    What couldn't,
    yet could be...




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 21:33:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I read this in your journal, I like the ink better than this tyoing stuff, This poem is very appropriate to the life you live.
    | Posted on 2007-11-09 00:00:00 | by jasonsanctuary | [ Reply to This ]


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