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    dots Submission Name: apart of youdots
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    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 133
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsapart of youdots
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    i only want to be apart of you

    my heart and soul to be only yours

    just so pure n true

    my words they're only for you

    i want to love and be loved to

    maybe that one is you

    to say i love you

    and you know its true

    cause theres no one else

    id want to be with

    other than you

    boy i just wanna say

    i wish i could fall in love with you

    forever be yours

    make love so pure and true

    just give you my heart and soul

    to live with you forever and a day

    what a dream come true

    if only i could be with you




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 22:02:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      pure and simple and full of heart felt words
    you are so romantic .you should cheek on my works and I promise you will be a fan of mine
    | Posted on 2007-11-03 00:00:00 | by muhammed | [ Reply to This ]
      I once new how that felt. I feel the emotion in the writing, the desires. It's a very good piece nice write.
    | Posted on 2007-11-02 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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