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    dots Submission Name: Unknown Saviordots
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    Author: bonita2689
    ASL Info:    18/f/in
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 42/58/33
    Words: 71
    Class/Type: Poetry/Dark
    Total Views: 44
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 457



    Description:
       the first poem I can ever remember writing that held importance to me


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    dotsUnknown Saviordots
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    As feelings of darkness
    engulf my soul
    I find but one who can save me
    from my twisted world
    Night after night
    tormented by my own lies
    my only chance of redemption
    falls not in my eyes
    You submit my anger
    now transformed into bliss
    My sorrows flee
    with one sweet kiss
    my head now bowed
    my presence alone
    I give you my hand
    as you lead me to the unknown




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 22:44:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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