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    dots Submission Name: Sweet Saviordots
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    Author: bonita2689
    ASL Info:    18/f/in
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 42/58/33
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 60
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 614



    Description:
       a whole lot of wordplay but not a lot of content


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    dotsSweet Saviordots
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    on the wings of angels
    your rescue me from my despair
    grasping hope that once was fleeting
    a burning desire that now is seeping
    a cascading ecstacy overflowing my body
    with glowing pleasure of bittersweet heavenly bliss
    electric pulses running through my veins
    grace poured out by the wounds of your hands
    from vibrations of jagged glass you suffer
    radiating an internal spectrum of water-color truths
    hazy doubts loom with intoxicating purity
    whispering glassy waters that kiss the moon
    smothering my soul with a fading innocence




    Submitted on 2007-11-01 22:54:42     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Ummm...sorry but gotta disagree with your description. Mucho content here. Love and salvation...cant go wrong with that.

    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by hyproglo | [ Reply to This ]



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