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    dots Submission Name: Session with Salvia Divinorumdots
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    Author: oixi
    ASL Info:    50/M/California
    Elite Ratio:    2.85 - 196/243/100
    Words: 124
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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       Rhyming couplets about experiencing sage. Salvia divinorum is divining sage used by Mazatec Shamans in healing ceremonies


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    dotsSession with Salvia Divinorumdots
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    The room closed in upon me like a collapsing cage
    First sensation after inhaling mystical sage

    Intoxication woven in gossamer layers
    Shrouding me euphoric as if by primal prayers

    Salvia summons an orchestral icy tree
    Enveloping my body, yet setting me free

    Surroundings transformed to a labyrinth of crystal
    Just two leaves smoked and I change to bright from dismal

    Like Mazatec Shamans from ages long in the past
    I find the pleasure of divinorum will not last

    Minutes that were hours have changed to minutes as before
    My crystal palace melted, reality has been restored

    Amazed at the experience that swept me off my feet
    Came from the plant that I use to simply flavor meat




    Submitted on 2007-11-02 15:46:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Hehehehe. Nice poem. I like the old style rhyming. Salvia is a beast. I sweared I'll never smoke it again. If you smoke much more it turns you into an animal. You can't controll yourself no matter what. Anyways, keep on writing and smoking!
    | Posted on 2007-11-03 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]


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