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    Author: Aaron Felix
    ASL Info:    17/m/USA
    Elite Ratio:    4.18 - 141/148/71
    Words: 112
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 122
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    Clock, a terror strikes five.
    Residents of the tops of trees mango their way
    downwards to get a see.
    (And the hula dancers in the middle of it all
    under the moon) get a lively
    kiss goodnight
    from soldiers
    who cannot fathom.

    Break a lively step!
    If it were a mosaic would
    it then shatter into pieces that were
    pictures of their own? Or maybe
    hula dancers
    cannot fathom.

    Those at home, it's proven,
    don't lay a hand. But just because
    in motion things are lighter, greater,
    They cannot fathom
    the likely chaotic havoc
    ...
    that will ensue




    Submitted on 2007-11-02 16:39:43     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You're kind of ridiculous. And I like it. Other things I like: you used the word 'havoc.' And 'mosaic'. And you made 'mango' into a verb. All equally awesome.
    | Posted on 2007-11-02 00:00:00 | by Jester_Gesture | [ Reply to This ]


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