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    dots Submission Name: Cosmic canvasdots
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    Author: albery rinash
    ASL Info:    18/M/USA
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 86/40/22
    Words: 57
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
    Total Views: 124
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 452



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    dotsCosmic canvasdots
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    This swirling cosmic canvas glazed,
    Crackling glimmers on the starry pitch.
    This dizzying blast, creative furnace,
    These splotches of insanity.

    Did God, who shaped the asinine,
    Splash such stochastic melting fires?
    Could God, the fount of filthy swine,
    Invent such blazing ghostly lyres?

    These indigo pools
    Of unreality?
    These splotches
    Of insanity?




    Submitted on 2007-11-02 19:07:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      if god has a migraine, i bet those hubble photographs of space dust and stars super-nova-ing would be exactly what it looks like.

    like god, i think he'd prefer it if "we didnt think too much about it." lest the whole universe crumble and fall amid black thoughts and black holes, until a rift in cosmic rays does eventually cause insanity.

    maybe aliens will arrive, who knows? i wonder if they get headaches too.



    peace.

    -pietro
    | Posted on 2007-11-03 00:00:00 | by Pietro | [ Reply to This ]
      This is the language of the poet, where he questions and redesigns, designates the stars to the written word. This is how it feels to read into the super-imposed mindframe of ultimate unknown, of the universe.

    You did very well.
    | Posted on 2007-11-02 00:00:00 | by JenFlynn | [ Reply to This ]



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