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    dots Submission Name: The Sanctity of Lovedots
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    Author: Shadow24968
    ASL Info:    16 Male
    Elite Ratio:    2.56 - 69/72/34
    Words: 430
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Love
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    dotsThe Sanctity of Lovedots
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    In this dying light
    We hold our hearts close to the sun
    But it burns our eyes
    To see our pain twisted and strained
    But in our hearts
    Is a love
    That keeps returning to despair
    And keeps on killing mankind.

    -Chorus-
    The feelings we hold in this world
    Anger to suffering
    And suffering to joy
    All these feelings we hold dear
    In our hearts and in our minds
    Hope is never lost
    Because your here by my side
    And I know this to be true
    You've never left without a smile
    And it brings joy to the heart
    Of a sacred life
    In the sactity of love

    In these dying arms
    Your smile turns to tears
    And I keep you no more
    As lashes turn to ashes
    But in your heart
    No love seems to fade
    And keeps going on
    Till your heart bares the shame.

    -Chorus-
    The feelings we hold in this world
    Anger to suffering
    And suffering to joy
    All these feelings we hold dear
    In our hearts and in our minds
    Hope is never lost
    Because your here by my side
    And I know this to be true
    You've never left without a smile
    And it brings joy to the heart
    Of a sacred life
    In the sactity of love

    In my endless dark
    Your flames keep on lighting
    And your graceful lips
    Whisper a sound of sweetness in my ears
    Your heart is always mine
    To share the burden of love
    But no hope is lost
    So save your tears for tomorrow

    -Chorus-
    The feelings we hold in this world
    Anger to suffering
    And suffering to joy
    All these feelings we hold dear
    In our hearts and in our minds
    Hope is never lost
    Because your here by my side
    And I know this to be true
    You've never left without a smile
    And it brings joy to the heart
    Of a sacred life
    In the sactity of love

    -Middle 8-

    -Chorus-
    The feelings we hold in this world
    Anger to suffering
    And suffering to joy
    All these feelings we hold dear
    In our hearts and in our minds
    Hope is never lost
    Because your here by my side
    And I know this to be true
    You've never left without a smile
    And it brings joy to the heart
    Of a sacred life
    In the sactity of love

    The feelings in this world
    From sadness to joy
    And joy to sorrow
    Is kept in a jar
    In the sacred sanctuary
    To be valued by our love.




    Submitted on 2007-11-02 19:32:19     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow... this is amazing!!! So much feeling... so many meanings in my opinion. I LOVE how you write that theses feelings of Love will never end, AND

    "In my endless dark
    Your flames keep on lighting
    And your graceful lips
    Whisper a sound of sweetness in my ears
    Your heart is always mine
    To share the burden of love
    But no hope is lost
    So save your tears for tomorrow"

    This right here says so much! I can picture what you have wrote, I can also relate and understand this... And thats a great thing you know, when a reader can not only understand the poetry another has wrote. But also vision what they are reading and comprehending, being able to relate... its an amazing and wonderful thing. Very good Shadow very good!

    ~!*Jackie*!~





    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by jackz | [ Reply to This ]


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