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    dots Submission Name: Blown Updots
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    Author: Sharati_hottie
    ASL Info:    20/ Female / MICHIGAN
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 86/81/90
    Words: 39
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 1327
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 302



    Description:
       Trent has me on this history and future thing, that has me writing up a storm.... sorry if some are more strange than others.


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    dotsBlown Updots
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    Fear, I've known,
    Fear, I've lived,
    Lifes, no more,
    Mine, I give,
    Time is gone,
    No time is left,
    The hour's here,
    It's all bereft,
    to late now,
    we've messed up,
    our lives, we feared,
    Are all blown up!




    Submitted on 2007-11-03 03:05:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Cool,cool I like it its like modernish (if that is a word) and sleek.While still conveying a message.Then its short and simple.All in all a really good poem.About the description.If somethings on your mind let it out.Thats why we have this crazy little thing called the internet. *.*


    The girl who cried wolf to much.
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]


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