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Fear, I've known, Fear, I've lived, Lifes, no more, Mine, I give, Time is gone, No time is left, The hour's here, It's all bereft, to late now, we've messed up, our lives, we feared, Are all blown up! |
Cool,cool I like it its like modernish (if that is a word) and sleek.While still conveying a message.Then its short and simple.All in all a really good poem.About the description.If somethings on your mind let it out.Thats why we have this crazy little thing called the internet. *.* The girl who cried wolf to much. | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ] | |