Blown Up

Author: Sharati_hottie ASL Info:    20/ Female / MICHIGAN Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 86 /81 /90 Words: 39

Class/Type: Poetry /Religious Total Views: 1693 Average Vote:    4.0000 Bytes: 302

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Blown Up

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Fear, I've known, Fear, I've lived, Lifes, no more, Mine, I give, Time is gone, No time is left, The hour's here, It's all bereft, to late now, we've messed up, our lives, we feared, Are all blown up!

Submitted on 2007-11-03 03:05:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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Cool,cool I like it its like modernish (if that is a word) and sleek.While still conveying a message.Then its short and simple.All in all a really good poem.About the description.If somethings on your mind let it out.Thats why we have this crazy little thing called the internet. *.* The girl who cried wolf to much.

| Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by BlueTorcher | [ Reply to This ]

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