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    dots Submission Name: under seigedots
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    Author: Sharati_hottie
    ASL Info:    20/ Female / MICHIGAN
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 86/81/90
    Words: 63
    Class/Type: Poetry/Passion
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    dotsunder seigedots
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    Done with who we serve under,
    we will not die because of our cover,
    we will stande free we will stand tall,
    we'll not divide so that rest may fall,
    we will not let them overcome,
    what we now worked so hard to become,
    they cannot have us,
    we have the rights,
    now all we must do,
    is get the courage to fight




    Submitted on 2007-11-03 14:47:02     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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