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    dots Submission Name: brother of minedots
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    Author: wordstogether
    ASL Info:    19/M/OH
    Elite Ratio:    0.52 - 0/0/3
    Words: 135
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsbrother of minedots
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    around and around
    just keep playing
    around and around
    because you don't know how sweet it sounds
    how sweet it is to watch your elbows twitch with each beat
    brother of mine
    who i raised to 'do right'
    we're getting older now
    the world is colder for me now
    and i'll be gone before you don your winter coat
    so listen close, these are the notes i never taught you:
    'do right' means close your eyes
    and let your heart guide your hands
    don't let anyone tell you your chords are out of tune
    just keep playing
    around and around, until your hands find their shape
    and trust that you'll look back someday
    thankful for all the wrong notes you played
    because now she's dancing to your tune
    around and around
    dancing to your tune.




    Submitted on 2007-11-03 17:14:00     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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