(No Spam mail)
3.15 - 113/123/144
No vote yet.
Ehh, listening to Nocturne Op. 9 No. 2 beautiful song. Letters to words came out of my hands. Still raw I suppose. Enjoy.
I know you will never understand me,
never try to either,
but why are these tears falling for you;
Why are they here
I tried to ignore your neglet
I still strive to be the best just for you
even though it'll never matter to you I still try
and when you ignore me, your child
I still hope you love me
if not love then at least acknowledged me
I'm hoping your 'love' was to make me stronger
I'm hoping your harsh words were to make me strong
And while I write this letter to you
I'm still hoping you at least loved me
at least acknowledged me
I've did everything I could to make you care
and nothing has mattered to you
I've become one of the best, but still nothing has changed
Will this letter change you
will this bullet change the way you think of me;
Submitted on 2007-11-03 23:47:10
Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
Rate This Submission
2: I dunno...
4: Pretty cool
||| Comments |||
Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [
1. Be honest.
2. Try not to give only compliments.
3. How did it make you feel?
4. Why did it make you feel that way?
5. Which parts?
6. What distracted from the piece?
7. What was unclear?
8. What does it remind you of?
9. How could it be improved?
10. What would you have done differently?
11. What was your interpretation of it?
12. Does it feel original?
Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
It means a lot to them, as it does to you.
no sky on the other side
A Sense Of Things
a leaf of shadow and edge
Relentless. The Visceral Fracture.
Florida's Autumn Solstice
A Thousand Reflections
A Worsening Effect
Across the bed
To the Artist
The Human Harmonic
A bit of Pain
The Curtain Call
Live In Between
The Abyss of Love
None the Wiser
Enter your search terms
Submit search form
January 10 07
I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my
[ Smaller ]
[ Bigger ]