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    dots Submission Name: why???dots
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    Author: sword stalker
    ASL Info:    18/female/home
    Elite Ratio:    2.57 - 27/27/16
    Words: 70
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 574
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    Bytes: 351



    Description:
       my love life has been... well not pleasent to say the least. this was something i wrote awhile back (before my current relationship which is working out just fine) so yeah i'll turn ya loose on it


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    i've tried my hand at love, but it doesn't ever seem to work out.... they always break up with me, not the other way around... all i can think when i look back is that it's all my fault... what did i do to drive them away??? is being with me so bad that i drive them to sleep with their ex girl friends? why do i even bother????




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 04:11:26     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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