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    dots Submission Name: don't know dots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 159
    Class/Type: Poetry/Venting
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    dotsdon't know dots
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    In this life we just don,t know what is around the corner
    we have only what we can handle
    some times you just have to take the leap of faith
    and go for what we don't know
    if we hesitate we could lose all we could have gained
    some doors open and we are to scared to see what lies ahead of us
    and to hurt to go back
    without fear we must
    go for what we can while we can or forever lose out
    life is what happens when you are looking for death
    some times we don't get what we want but we all ways get what we need
    and even then fear can steal you dreams and rape your heart
    so never fear what you don't know for it's in
    time that we learn to push past our fears and learn from our mistakes.




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 09:55:05     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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