Description: to Joshua G
you are forever in my heart and on my hand.
the sunset in your eyes -------------------------------------------
we moved at the speed of light
in to the sunset the closer we got
the faster the sun went down
just like our love for each other
no time to wait or it might be to late
for us
our love like no other
rushed in and rushed out
we kissed and held hands as if it were our last
and it was but what you gave me will last forever
the sunset in your eyes
Thnx for you kind comment. Short but appreciative.
I appreciate the reference to speed of light which is cunningly used because from my perception we are Light beings and thus we do `travel` as such. The closer you get to the `sun` of your Love through the fringe stages of sunset, the longer you want it to last. And don’t want it to go away. So it is with Love. The closer and deeper you venture the more you experience the more there is to fathom the more difficult and complex it may become.
You refer to your acquaintance as briefly which is beautifully setout from sunset to sundown is the most beautiful but short time experience. I liked it. My type of appreciative mind. Joachim
This one is excellent,the closer we got the faster the sun went down, wow girl,wish I wrote that,the only thing I can say is maybe it could be longer no, anyway loved it.
Submission Name: the sunset in your eyes
