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    dots Submission Name: when you go dots
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    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    34yesplease69NV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.56 - 38/35/44
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 153
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 512



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    dotswhen you go dots
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    when you go and I know you will you always do
    you leave behind what love you can give for a time
    when time is short you make do with what you got
    and you my dear have got a lot to give to this world
    so don't stop given and don't stop running
    you don't have to commit to life
    you just live it to your fullest
    and that my friend makes you brave
    but when you go I will miss you and
    I know you will always have a place in my heart




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 10:12:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Damn it... why does every you wright has to do
    with me??? I Wouldent comment if I dident like
    it. Yr work is getting better I could feel where
    you were going with this one and I liked it.
    As a wrighter I liked where where it took me.
    Thats what good work is susposto do. Good Job
    Take care. J
    | Posted on 2007-12-08 00:00:00 | by oononotthatguy | [ Reply to This ]


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