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    dots Submission Name: when you go dots

    Author: mekisha4ever
    ASL Info:    39yespleaseNV.
    Elite Ratio:    1.58 - 38/36/47
    Words: 103
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotswhen you go dots

    when you go and I know you will you always do
    you leave behind what love you can give for a time
    when time is short you make do with what you got
    and you my dear have got a lot to give to this world
    so don't stop given and don't stop running
    you don't have to commit to life
    you just live it to your fullest
    and that my friend makes you brave
    but when you go I will miss you and
    I know you will always have a place in my heart

    Submitted on 2007-11-04 10:12:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2007-12-08 00:00:00 | by oononotthatguy | [ Reply to This ]

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