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    dots Submission Name: The Raindots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Nature
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    dotsThe Raindots
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    The rain falls hard and heavy
    But to me feels cool and soft
    It's comes down all around me
    As it occupies my thoughts
    It's beautiful in all it's glory
    And tranquil as the sea
    Each drop is a different feeling
    As it's raining down on me
    The sounds of the drips dropping
    Is music to my ears
    And as the thunderstorms are pounding
    The wind whistling is all I hear
    People look around for shelter
    As I'm walking down my path
    Enjoying every minute of it
    As I smile and give a laugh
    The rain is an amazing thing
    That will help you realize
    What makes the rain so perfect
    Is that no one sees you cry




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 15:10:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      THis is a wonderfully beautiful. It flowed great. And it is very touching as well a very vivid. Great mental picture given by your words.

    ~~Donna~~
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by PrettyHeart | [ Reply to This ]


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