Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • RolePlay
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • My Youtube
  • Ear Training
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Wishfull Thinkingdots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
    Total Views: 654
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 686



    Description:
       


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsWishfull Thinkingdots
    -------------------------------------------


    I'm looking at the open sky
    In this dark and lonely night
    Trying to find a reason why
    My dreams are so far out of sight
    I wish that things could be more clear
    And shooting stars would just appear
    So my sentiments can be well known
    And my deepest desires could find a home
    I close my eyes and fold my hands
    Truly hoping for a miraculous plan
    Uttering aloud what my heart wants most
    Letting it go, yet holding it close
    An ounce of magic is all that I need
    To help convince me and make me believe
    Because wishing on stars is not what I do
    But here I hope that my wishes come true




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 15:14:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      Because wishing on stars is not what I do
    But here I hope that my wishes come true

    i really liked that part cause i have said those things to myself before. really sad tho, i hope your dreams do come true one day, bcuz im praying that mine will too.
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


    Think Feedback more than Compliments :: [ Guidelines ]

    1. Be honest.
    2. Try not to give only compliments.
    3. How did it make you feel?
    4. Why did it make you feel that way?
    5. Which parts?
    6. What distracted from the piece?
    7. What was unclear?
    8. What does it remind you of?
    9. How could it be improved?
    10. What would you have done differently?
    11. What was your interpretation of it?
    12. Does it feel original?



    152160

    Be kind, take a few minutes to review the hard work of others <3
    It means a lot to them, as it does to you.

    Life changes in a moment written by Ramneet
    To the King written by HisNameIsNoMore
    untitled written by Chelebel
    The Song on Your Guitar written by SavedDragon
    Sunset written by rev.jpfadeproof
    Still Fighting See? written by ForgottenGraves
    4th Season of Vivaldi written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Deaf Dumb and Blind is no excuse written by poetotoe
    Love Can Be... written by HAVENSMITH92
    Pain, an elixir. written by Ramneet
    Summer written by layDsayD
    A Sonnet for Nina written by SavedDragon
    Wasps written by Wolfwatching
    It's Night Now written by RisingSon
    Push written by JanePlane
    Linger written by saartha
    Fathoms of the Lullaby Sea written by HisNameIsNoMore
    Be Free written by hybridsongwrite
    Treasure Chest written by PieceOfCake
    Bee Keeper written by endlessgame23
    4th of July written by layDsayD
    The Promise written by annie0888
    Devils in the Details written by endlessgame23
    Pressure written by hybridsongwrite
    Unfortunate Reality written by TeslaKoyal
    To written by SavedDragon
    Wavelength written by saartha
    Hopelessly Blind written by ForgottenGraves
    What happens written by Wolfwatching
    One Thing written by Wolfwatching

    Google
     


    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry