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    dots Submission Name: Wishfull Thinkingdots
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    Author: Realitywarp87
    ASL Info:    25/M/FL
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 27/53/63
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Poetry/Longing
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    dotsWishfull Thinkingdots
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    I'm looking at the open sky
    In this dark and lonely night
    Trying to find a reason why
    My dreams are so far out of sight
    I wish that things could be more clear
    And shooting stars would just appear
    So my sentiments can be well known
    And my deepest desires could find a home
    I close my eyes and fold my hands
    Truly hoping for a miraculous plan
    Uttering aloud what my heart wants most
    Letting it go, yet holding it close
    An ounce of magic is all that I need
    To help convince me and make me believe
    Because wishing on stars is not what I do
    But here I hope that my wishes come true




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 15:14:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Because wishing on stars is not what I do
    But here I hope that my wishes come true

    i really liked that part cause i have said those things to myself before. really sad tho, i hope your dreams do come true one day, bcuz im praying that mine will too.
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by scardnscared | [ Reply to This ]


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