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    dots Submission Name: Windowsdots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    dotsWindowsdots
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    Windows

    They are opened again,
    Ready to see what is out there.
    Hoping to see it all fresh and clearly.

    They were closed so long.
    I forgot the beauty and the peace.
    All I had to do was open them up.

    Looking out I see all I have missed.
    The love that is out there is alive.
    Full of Passion, that of a kiss.

    Now I looked out, please look in.
    I am opened again ready to begin.
    My place is full of love and peace.

    My soul is once again happy.
    It shines through my Windows.
    My Eyes that now see love.




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 15:27:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      ive heard a lot of pieces like this before. keep posting. i like the windows




    tina
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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