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    dots Submission Name: how do i find happy again?dots
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    Author: scardnscared
    ASL Info:    25/ DFW
    Elite Ratio:    3.1 - 585/498/311
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    It's useless
    I should of seen this coming
    I knew I could of been like this
    But
    I tried to change my mind from this
    You love me
    and I don't love you
    It's my fault
    I knew that I would screw something good up
    I tried to become something new
    I tried and tried
    But it just doesn't work like that
    You see so much
    Of what really isn't here
    It's hard for me
    Cause I've waited for a love like this
    For so long
    But its all wrong
    and i'm all wrong for you
    But you won't listen
    and I won't talk about it
    It only takes so much for me to run
    and in my mind im a million miles away
    But you hold me so tight
    Im afriad that I could die
    I can't breathe anymore
    I don't know up from down
    I guess its okay if your happy
    But how do I find happy again?




    Submitted on 2007-11-04 15:39:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Awww...
    Happy is not the answer. Ever. What good ever came out of being content?

    As for your poem, Really cool. Its all good. I loved the part about not listening vs. Not talking. Communication isn't always key. But, then again, my heart always gets broke 'cause of that [censored].

    ~Karrie
    | Posted on 2007-11-05 00:00:00 | by dismal_s child | [ Reply to This ]
      everything you want will destroy you, everything you dont feel for loves you. i'm trying to find happy myself. so far all i've learned is there is no such thing. let go and join the search again, at least its a thrill. i'd die of boredom, i live for disaster and chaos.
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by DBC | [ Reply to This ]


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