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    dots Submission Name: Not enough timedots
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    Author: Randa04
    ASL Info:    19/Female/NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.64 - 21/63/77
    Words: 53
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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       Deffinately not finished


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    dotsNot enough timedots
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    I don't have enough strength to pass around..

    I barely have enough for myself.

    I get so stressed when things go wrong..





    I waste so much time..

    making up my mind..

    I don't know what I want..






    Submitted on 2007-11-04 15:49:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Short and strong. Every word seems to be of importance.
    | Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by Dreamer Daze | [ Reply to This ]


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