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With a little help


Author: MC white
ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
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I went and saw some old buddies over the weekend and wrote a little rhyme about it. Its a rap which is why theres some slang and little to no punctuation so read it accordingly.


With a little help



It seems true friends last,
I'm glad to say.
Though we never see eachother
we can spend a day
Gettin lost, gettin high
doin whatever we please.
Never stopping, never pausing
never awkwardly
tryin to start a conversation
or force a thing
cuz we're still as close as ever
and dont have to think
of all the miles, all the months,
that come in between
when we're hanging out together'
you know it ain't no thing

And I'm glad for that dude
cuz its been pretty hard
leavin all you guys behind
and it seems so far,
not just the place you live
but my life, Ive changed
and yet somehow our relationship
has stayed the same
and Im thankful for that homey
but I could never describe
this to your face, thats why I place
it in this lyrical vibe
its a cowardice, I know
but its all I can do
I act the poet
now you know it
and this verse is through




Submitted on 2007-11-04 20:46:18     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Friends are great!!! This proves how much friends mean to all kinds of people even the ones who can't let it show.
Good write,
-jenny
| Posted on 2007-11-05 00:00:00 | by Darklonelygirl | [ Reply to This ]
  but I could never describe
this to your face, thats why I place
it in this lyrical vibe
its a cowardice, I know
but its all I can do
I act the poet
now you know it
and this verse is through



i dont like it. but i understand. this piece was kind of weak so if you ever do get the gut to show him take it out. other than this stanza it was great. a lot will relate.





tina
| Posted on 2007-11-04 00:00:00 | by ladiesplanet1 | [ Reply to This ]


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