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    dots Submission Name: [.T.I.M.E.=.N.O.W.]dots

    Author: justkillme08
    ASL Info:    18/F/MA
    Elite Ratio:    1.63 - 97/170/124
    Words: 290
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    Time is now

    is tomorrow

    but not the past

    its whats happening

    whats gunna happen

    but not what happend

    time is not always on our side

    but sometimes time is

    listen to yourself and your heart

    listen to what it wants

    cause once you decide

    and make a decision

    theres no more time for you

    the clock will tick until its over

    it will tick until the end

    time will tick until theres no more time

    because time will never really end

    times here when we need it

    but sometimes its not

    sometimes time saves you

    sometimes time does not

    a second early it could have been your last breath

    a second later it could have been your last breath

    if it wasnt for time sometimes

    you could just be dead.

    so before something happens

    before you finally relize

    tell everyone you love that you love them

    tell them everything you feel

    and if you want them and no longer have them

    who knows time can only heal

    but theres a clock for everything

    a clock for love

    a clock for dispare

    a clock for angry

    and a clock for every other feeling out ther

    sometimes love runs out

    dispare doesnt always stay to long

    anger runs its course

    just live every other feeling we know

    but this is time

    and we have time now

    so use your time

    make things right

    follow your heart

    befor time is truely up

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