space a endless void vast and dark cold with new life forming as a star explodes a new one forms. as the bright cololers light up the void of darkness life is brought to the planets and life is anew.
Interesting take on space, you turned a pretty much open subject and painted it with short, sweet imagery. Sometimes less is more...that's the instance on this case.
Not much I can say on this, is instead of making poems on paragraph, divide it up so it's easier on the reader and makes it easier to give tips and catch errors, ok?
I like your tone of writing, but the punctuation needs a little work, either forming complete sentences or putting it in poetic form. I can tell you're a thinker!... that's good. Keep pouring that into your writing.
Vencix
Great Job withthis
I Liked the main topic
Outer Space is so vast and there is somuch we are yet to learn about the beautiful open void
It is so good to see you back posting again
You were one of my first True Friends on this site and I really missed talking to you
Are you doing ok?
Im looking forward to reading more from you in the future
I Love reading your writes as they all show a A Beautiful Love for nature and the world around us
God Bless
Your True Friend
Ron
Submission Name: space
