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    dots Submission Name: Friends..What do you really know? dots
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    Author: ImperfectGirl1
    ASL Info:    19 f USA
    Elite Ratio:    2.66 - 33/57/33
    Words: 161
    Class/Type: Misc/Friendship
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    dotsFriends..What do you really know? dots
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    Are there sometimes when you can't expain why you are friends with some people and barely speak to others?

    Are there sometimes where you ask yourself,"Why aren't I friends with her? We have so much more in common."

    Are there times when you look at the friends you have and wonder why they are your friends?

    Are there times when you question whether or not your friends are truly your friends?

    Do you ever feel like you are on the outside looking in at what you could have?

    Do you feel like you don't really know what friendships are really like?

    FRIENDS... Why are there times when you doubt them and times when you just love them?

    Can ONE ever know who their TRUE friends really are?!





    Submitted on 2007-11-05 18:39:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Can ONE ever know who their TRUE friends really are?!

    NO!
    | Posted on 2007-11-06 00:00:00 | by Paradox | [ Reply to This ]
      this was very misc.
    | Posted on 2007-11-05 00:00:00 | by EEKS | [ Reply to This ]
      its very phillosphoical.
    i just dont see how that would go to music. may be you would do better if you made the flow and meter a little better and made it into a poem.
    just a thought. it is a very good question. it makes some one think about what was just said. i like that in a poem / music.
    i also like the parallelism that you put into it. it makes it have a sort of ring to it !
    good job!



    annie!
    | Posted on 2007-11-05 00:00:00 | by annie smith | [ Reply to This ]


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