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    dots Submission Name: Will You?dots
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    Author: BrokenAngelKat
    ASL Info:    20-F-NC
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 103/233/192
    Words: 140
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 743
    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsWill You?dots
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    Will you comfort me when I'm crying?
    When you hold me when I think I'm dying?
    Will you say anything to make me smile?
    Will you kiss me in the rain?
    Will you hold me close just to feel me?
    Will you text me just to say hey?
    Will you post stupid little bulletins because you love me?

    Will you give me a nickname?
    Will you hold my hand all the time?
    Will you look into my eyes and tell me I'm worth it?
    Will you write me little love notes that mean nothing to others but everything to us?
    Will you cherish the moments we had?
    Will you wait for the moments we'll have?
    Will you protect me from harm?
    Will you shelter me from my fears?

    Will you be my prince charming??
    Because Cinderella's right here.




    Submitted on 2007-11-05 19:44:32     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Wow. This was an awesome! read. I myself have thought these things before and am still wondering if he (prince charming) will ever come my way. Sigh. Guess we all think about it at some point. Great job.
    | Posted on 2008-01-02 00:00:00 | by Draumrkopa | [ Reply to This ]
      this is how I feel about JG one of the Elite.
    | Posted on 2007-11-05 00:00:00 | by mekisha4ever | [ Reply to This ]


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