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    dots Submission Name: Its To Latedots
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    Author: Nessyjane
    ASL Info:    21/F/CA
    Elite Ratio:    0.68 - 97/60/44
    Words: 121
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
    Total Views: 804
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 735



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    dotsIts To Latedots
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    Just couldnít find the way
    I swore I wouldnít drown
    Never looking ahead
    I think Godís given me the frown
    I promise I wonít always be lost
    One day Iíll learn to pay
    Do you think I was destined?
    Was it really meant to be this way?
    It will never be to late
    Thatís what I have to tell my conscience
    Will I ever make it to the end?
    My dreams have had an absence
    This has truly become confusing
    Will I live tonight?
    Everything is now blurred
    Can I give up the fight?
    Today was harder then the last
    Is tomorrow going to be worse?
    This couldnít be true
    The only chance is to breath in the curse





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    ||| Comments |||
      Deprestion gets the best of us all sometimes.
    Writing helps I think. Thiswas another great write. Thanks for sharing.
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-26 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]


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