Don't Worry by TheBlackFairy

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Submission Name: Don't Worry dots

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Author:	TheBlackFairy
ASL Info:	18/female/Caldwell
Elite Ratio:	2.94 - 32/29/15
Words:	84

Class/Type:	Poetry/Love
Total Views:	145
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	486

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Don't Worry dots

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Don’t worry about me,
I’m not afraid to move on,
I won’t lie and tell you I won’t miss you,
But I know the pain will pass.
I can live with out you.

So don’t worry about me,
I’ll be just fine,
I won’t let the shadows destroy me,
For I know the sun will rise with or without your love,
The pain may linger,
But I know I can live without you.
The true question is,
Can you live without me?

Submitted on 2007-11-06 11:04:42 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  A mightily mature poem! It is wonderful to read something other than that twice awful "woe is me and death to you" teen poems! finely done, loved it! bravo... bravo... bravo... michael
| Posted on 2008-04-10 00:00:00 | by Algol46 | [ Reply to This ]
  I liked this poem, I just recently had the realization that I can live without her and it is a wonderful thing to feel after all this time, keep writing, Dean
| Posted on 2007-11-11 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]
  I really like the realism that you portrayed. With the line: "I can live without you". I like how you stayed away from the normal cliché of "I can't live without you" that plagues most poems of this genre.

The only bad thing that i have to say is that in the line: "The pain my linger" I am not sure or not but I think you forgot an "a" in "my"

Anyways, good luck with more writing, I anticipate more from you.
| Posted on 2007-11-06 00:00:00 | by enigmaticone | [ Reply to This ]
  i liked this i just think that you could add a little more to this and it would be a great write
| Posted on 2007-11-06 00:00:00 | by robbie | [ Reply to This ]

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