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    dots Submission Name: Where for art thou?dots
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    Author: Elissar
    ASL Info:    22, Female, Minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    3.9 - 32/28/14
    Words: 256
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 714
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1495



    Description:
       A love poem of a girl who has not known love but yearns for it.


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    dotsWhere for art thou?dots
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    Of thine face, I have not seen.
    Of thine voice, I have not heard.
    Of thine hands, I have not felt.
    Of thine lips, I have not tasted.

    Where thou art, I dost not know.
    Mine eyes have yet to see thee.
    Mine heart dost yearn to know thee.
    I am blind to where thou art.

    Of thine face, I have not seen.
    Of thine voice, I have not heard.
    Of thine hands, I have not felt.
    Of thine lips, I have not tasted.

    Thine voice, hast eluded me.
    Mine ears dost not hear it.
    Haveth they ever heard it.
    Mine mind sayeth to me no.

    Of thine face, I have not seen.
    Of thine voice, I have not heard.
    Of thine hands, I have not felt.
    Of thine lips, I have not tasted.

    I haveth yet to feel thine hands.
    Caressing mine heart and body.
    Why dost thou not touch me?
    Art thou there to hear mine thoughts?

    Of thine face, I have not seen.
    Of thine voice, I have not heard.
    Of thine hands, I have not felt.
    Of thine lips, I have not tasted.

    Mine lips dost crave the warmth of thine.
    Why cannot mine eyes find thou.
    To love me and care for me, is all I ask.
    But thou art not there to do so.

    Of thine face, I have not seen.
    Of thine voice, I have not heard.
    Of thine hands, I have not felt.
    Of thine lips, I have not tasted.




    Submitted on 2007-11-06 15:03:49     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      to be honest: it's too wordy.
    | Posted on 2008-03-04 00:00:00 | by orange | [ Reply to This ]


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