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    dots Submission Name: The Ex Effectdots
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    Author: b_v_grant
    ASL Info:    23/M/Jamaica
    Elite Ratio:    3.27 - 125/118/69
    Words: 202
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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       Am I a bad person because i cheated, tell me elite writers. Can cheating be something you have no control over. Gimme your feedback, I'll appreciate anything. And for anyone who is thinking about it just use me as an example, if your conscience is active then dont cuz it will only leave you bitter and with alot of questions still left to be answered. Its good for the moment, but not for the times ahead. Peace


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    dotsThe Ex Effectdots
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    Why cant you just stay in the past,
    Why cant you let me be,
    Its sick if I say you want me,
    When me you just don't see,
    I've tried, I've tried to ignore you,
    I've stayed so far apart,
    But now when winters over,
    You are still living in my heart,
    I act as if you weren't there,
    A final stunt to move on,
    I act as if I just don't care,
    For months I've tried all along.
    It took two years to give into temptations,
    I've now committed the sweetest sin,
    Did I just say the word committed,
    Because thats the dilemma I'm in.
    I wonder how he will respond,
    I'm not hoping for the best,
    But to tell him I will never,
    Then with my ex I rest.
    I believed it was something I had to do,
    Before I started the race,
    Because the minute I got out the blocks,
    It would've shown its face,
    I had other options,
    No doubt I took the easy one,
    The Ex Effect was with me,
    It lives with everyone.
    If ever you've stated,
    That you will never cheat,
    Just be very careful,
    The Ex Effect lurks under sheet.







    Submitted on 2007-11-06 20:45:39     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I believe many can find this relatable. What is with those ex's anyways? Good job
    | Posted on 2011-03-20 00:00:00 | by chiatealover | [ Reply to This ]
      They say "all is fair in love and war"! At least, that's what THEY say! Excellent contemplative write, Brian!
    | Posted on 2008-03-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      ah. this was the first one from you tt i read and liked. The original title itself "The Ex effect" caught my attention. Well, i think its original, ive never read any same title so far. I like the fact that every emotion was taken into consideration- especially the feeling of guilt. And urh, to answer your question- in my honest opinion, (no offence) a person can refrain from cheating - its only the matter if he/she(the person who cheated) "allows" the cheating to take place. urh yeahh. peace to u too.
    | Posted on 2008-03-20 00:00:00 | by rosesrouges | [ Reply to This ]
      I liked the peom it was written well, and as for the cheating, I've been in several positions where I nearly got swept back by an ex, but theres a point i think when you can stop yourself. I'm no great judge on morality, but i do think theres a point where you can choose wheather or not you get so deep that you loose your better jugdement. Anywho nice work i enjoyed reading it.
    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by ira | [ Reply to This ]
      First I really liked the piece. Its very beautiful and personal. Second, I have cheated in the past, with an ex, and know the feelings youre talking about from personal experience so it meant alot. Cheatings really hard to pin down morality-wise, because obviously the dishonesty is bad but sometimes you get swept up you know, and sometimes those times are good. I dunno. Im not gonna judge.
    | Posted on 2007-11-06 00:00:00 | by MC white | [ Reply to This ]


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