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    Author: Aruemos
    ASL Info:    20/M/StL
    Elite Ratio:    7.24 - 102/79/40
    Words: 91
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 161
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    To swing the axe
    To pull the trigger
    whichever makes this man die quicker
    but be Humane give him liqour

    who said you had the right to judge?
    Is it because

    You are sinless
    stone held in your hand
    In disbelief St. Peter's book; I demand

    The registar that holds all
    your thoughts & your plans
    Read out your life as you swear
    there is No red on Thou hands

    That I doubt and its plain to see
    this Judgement is best left
    to God & History.




    Submitted on 2007-11-07 01:17:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this poem. It shows of the hipocresy of people who like to judge. I did not like the liquor part. I believe is the same thing as killing the man. And yes we should look at our life instead of going about and watching someone else's.

    Peace
    Tradia
    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by Tradia | [ Reply to This ]
      my impression of your poem, well maybe it,s about how we as people judge other people far to quickly,without getting to know or understand them(history shows us that) we should judge ourselves first before we cast the first stone, like it says in the bible.maybe i am wrong because the last szanza is about an eye for an eye.that,s what capital punishment is based on.interesting poem, which made me think, early in the morning,

    "Be Humane give him liqour"
    i,m not to sure if poison is humaner than a bullet.

    tschüß
    gerry


    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]



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