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    dots Submission Name: Doomdots
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    Author: wizkid17
    Elite Ratio:    0.7 - 0/2/6
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Dark
    Total Views: 80
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    Bytes: 733



    Description:
       I just had a prose-spasm. This is what came out.


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    dotsDoomdots
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    We all shall die,
    Both you and I.
    So why toil away?
    Why not just play?
    I could have made a difference,
    I could have saved the world.
    When they passed my sentence,
    Not a single cry was heard.
    I would have been the saviour,
    I would have stopped the end.
    But I could not stop the terror,
    So my apologies I send.
    I walk along the river,
    its waters made of souls.
    Of hope their is no sliver,
    The damned in their graves roll.
    If you had only listened,
    I would have been there.
    But you have been chastened,
    So you would never dare.
    All it takes is the courage of one,
    To save the one and all.




    Submitted on 2007-11-07 11:20:17     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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