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    dots Submission Name: Sploshy sploshydots
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    Author: Tradia
    ASL Info:    17/F
    Elite Ratio:    3.02 - 13/28/26
    Words: 98
    Class/Type: Poetry/Comedy
    Total Views: 118
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 758



    Description:
       This is a poem written in a few minutes as i read a book. I do not expect it to be a masterpiece but a simple childish poem.


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    dotsSploshy sploshydots
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    Sploshy, sploshy goes the raven"
    the woman said
    "really mother, say something else"
    the cunning child stared at her mother
    "the raven goes caw caw"
    her brother spoke
    raising his head from his book
    "sploshy sploshy the raven goes
    don't you know?"
    the mother continued
    reading from her poem book
    "mother, don't you know?
    I'm not a child
    I'm full grown
    I know what a raven does"
    the little gril slid down
    she picked up her toys
    and then on the windowsill
    a raven sat still
    opening his beak he said
    "sploshy sploshy the raven goes"





    Submitted on 2007-11-07 11:57:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      hehe.

    i love how kids are so convinced theyre grown up. i remember my brother when he was 11 and my mother asked him since when did he think he was the voice of authority in our house and his response: since i became a man

    hahahahahaha!
    a coupla weeks later me and my friend took him and his mate to the park and they were hassling us for ice cream. i told him he had to earn an ice cream [and my idea of earning was him going away and leaving me and my friend along for half an hour coz i was sick of that kid] and he was like "oh i could so run round this park 5 times..." so i told him to go for it and id buy them ice cream.
    he came back after his 5 rounds looking proud and i was like... ive done 6 before hahah!

    its funny when kids think theyre grown up and are proved wrong.
    mum going sploshy sploshy and being backed up by the raven... priceless.
    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by Someones Epiphany | [ Reply to This ]
      hmmm, it made me chuckle. short and simple, i didn't interprit it as something you seriously wanted people to analize. but it was worth reading all in all.
    | Posted on 2007-11-07 00:00:00 | by poppi | [ Reply to This ]



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