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    dots Submission Name: Beyond Californiadots
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    Author: Epiphany
    ASL Info:    42/F/Universe
    Elite Ratio:    4.38 - 3342/2139/390
    Words: 25
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Passion
    Total Views: 899
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 194



    Description:
       There's nothing like good soul friendz, beginnings with no ends, sushi & saki (oofda!);

    dinner with friendz: $80

    pool game @ neighborhood pub: $1

    having "5,0" chase a suspect through your best friend's back yard at midnight: priceless!!!


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    dotsBeyond Californiadots
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    Alive and swaying in upward dance
    green trees
    blue lake
    happy soul
    Awake in relaxed surreal possibility
    red hawk
    poppy sky
    peaceful mind




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