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The Colosseum

Author: MC white
ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
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Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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What writing is to me.

The Colosseum

Take from me these shallow words,
the feelings they express.
Give back to me their meanings so that
I might find some rest.

I think in circles, wring my hands
type a line or two.
And hope that I can understand them,
hope that they are true.

Because to lie to strangers seems
a greater sin to me,
than deceiving my own mind.
Because I'm only me.

And they are them, majority,
a callous, clashing crowd.
And I must please them if I can,
their roar is just so loud.

Submitted on 2007-11-07 16:02:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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