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    dots Submission Name: The Colosseumdots
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    Author: MC white
    ASL Info:    20/Male/Ohio
    Elite Ratio:    3.26 - 71/73/45
    Words: 94
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsThe Colosseumdots
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    Take from me these shallow words,
    the feelings they express.
    Give back to me their meanings so that
    I might find some rest.

    I think in circles, wring my hands
    type a line or two.
    And hope that I can understand them,
    hope that they are true.

    Because to lie to strangers seems
    a greater sin to me,
    than deceiving my own mind.
    Because I'm only me.

    And they are them, majority,
    a callous, clashing crowd.
    And I must please them if I can,
    their roar is just so loud.




    Submitted on 2007-11-07 16:02:38     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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