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    dots Submission Name: Ramblin'dots
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    Author: Roberto Santos
    ASL Info:    18/Male/India
    Elite Ratio:    2.96 - 118/159/75
    Words: 111
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 660
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 815



    Description:
       Ramblin' on as usual


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    dotsRamblin'dots
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    I know I'm Mad
    I've been mad for fucking years
    But I sure ain't sad
    It don't bring up tears...

    No sense cryin' about it
    I sure am happy
    I ain't botherin' about it
    It's just a part of me...

    You don't want none of it, babe
    If you can't stand mystery
    Go on and get with it
    It's all ancient history...

    Can't make you understand
    About what you'll be missin'
    It coulda been excitin'
    You ain't the kind, I'm guessin'...

    It sure don't make sense
    To ramble on with the rhyme
    You don't have a feel for it
    Don't waste your precious time...





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