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    dots Submission Name: Knowndots
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    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 109
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
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    dotsKnowndots
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    Something lets me say what I do
    In other times I say what it does
    A sniff of love makes it go away
    They want to take it all away
    Destroy me in all ways possible
    I see how they can see me
    Well I let them in a way
    Easy access soul
    Yours for the taken
    I do see ;how ever what they cannot
    I see myself
    I see a life beyond this
    Well we all do
    What makes me different from everyone else?
    Spirit.
    We can know a lot in the same time not know nothing
    Learn from what you donít know
    Then you will know.




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