okay so when i read this i think of what id think of if i was dead and 6 feet under. realising that thinking isnt something a dead person should be able to do but can you imagine just... not being able to think?
your pieces always mess with my head because they seem so abstract and therefore can be interpreted in many different ways.
the lick me at the end confuses me.
unless you use 'lick' in a sense of beat me/i lose but i dont know if your country uses lick to mean that.
Raspberry sparks, an ancient tortoise rises up into the sky
an interesting line but somehow i haven,t got a clue about what you are trying to bring across in your poem.the writer knows what he is saying,but the reader(myself) is left......
I believe you are referring to how even in death the energy carrying the Human in his or her life on the Earth still lives on
It is true that energy can latch on to any other living thing in effect creating what others may call reincarnation
I thought you did a Good job describing this
Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think