Oh, you truly hit this one on the head. No, you didn't skirt around the issue. You attacked the issue and mocked it until it asphyxiated. Why do I think this?
"And if you do
I'll take hold of you
With all the love I feel
And we'll jump off a cliff" --> Yay! Jagged rocks are my friend!
Jumping off a cliff sounds both terrifying and hilarious. Sometimes I think I've already fallen.
"Now while the wind whistles through your hair
And your hearts in your throat
You're thinking this is where the human body meets the jagged rock
And you're thinking that this what it is to be alive" --> That would probably be me when I looked at the ground coming towards me. Well, in fact it would be me going towards the ground. I call it a group effort.
This was a wonderful piece. I wouldn't change anything in it. It is good the way it is.