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    dots Submission Name: another daydots
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    Author: allmine
    ASL Info:    25/chick/your nightmares
    Elite Ratio:    2.52 - 33/69/45
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 759
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    Description:
       This is my life... I'd be suprised if you got it but everything has a meaning, a purpous behind it.. If you want to know what they meen ask and I will tell you... Everyone has their own perspective on this piece and they all think theres is rite.. even those closest to me couldnt understand it all...


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    dotsanother daydots
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    another day
    another way

    another pill
    so nothings real

    another dream
    or so it seems

    another face
    a different pace

    another blade
    just so you can get laid

    another love lost
    is another life cost

    another mother so mean
    another child not seen

    another fathers dissaperace
    involvs someone's interferance

    another friend gone
    one more sad song










    Submitted on 2007-11-08 18:32:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I get it!!! and i can so relate... its awesome... well i can relate to all but the "another father gone" part... my dad is still with me.... sorry yours is gone... but great piece!!!
    | Posted on 2007-11-08 00:00:00 | by x_Broken_x | [ Reply to This ]


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